diff --git a/desktop/src-common/advent/screens/rooms/dream.clj b/desktop/src-common/advent/screens/rooms/dream.clj
index 1bc34b62..89933f21 100644
--- a/desktop/src-common/advent/screens/rooms/dream.clj
+++ b/desktop/src-common/advent/screens/rooms/dream.clj
@@ -145,17 +145,30 @@
 (defn do-intro [entities]
   (Thread/sleep 2000)
 
-  (actions/talk entities :fairy-godfather "... Tick ...")
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "What's going on?")
   (actions/walk-straight-to entities :ego [160 60])
-  (actions/do-dialogue entities :ego "What the?")
+  (actions/do-dialogue entities :ego "Who turned out the lights?")
   (actions/walk-straight-to entities :ego [120 50])
-  (actions/do-dialogue entities :ego "Who turned out the lights?"
-                       :ego "What's going on?")
-  (actions/talk entities :fairy-godfather "... Tiiiiiiccckkkk ...")
-  (actions/do-dialogue entities :ego "Who is that?")
-  (actions/walk-straight-to entities :ego [140 55] :face :right)
-(actions/do-dialogue entities :ego "Show yourself!")
+  (Thread/sleep 900)
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "Am I...")
   (Thread/sleep 500)
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "... dead?")
+  (Thread/sleep 900)
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "... But I'm too young to die!" :anim :frustrated-talk :stop? false)
+  (Thread/sleep 200)
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "I promise I'll be a better boy!" :anim :frustrated-talk :stop? false)
+  (Thread/sleep 200)
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "I'll never steal another one of Gandarf's potions!" :anim :frustrated-talk :stop? false)
+  (Thread/sleep 200)
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "I swear!" :anim :frustrated-talk :stop? false)
+  (actions/talk entities :fairy-godfather "... Tick ...")
+  (Thread/sleep 500)
+  (actions/walk-straight-to entities :ego [140 55] :face :right)
+  (Thread/sleep 500)
+  (actions/do-dialogue entities :ego "Huh?")
+  (actions/talk entities :fairy-godfather "... Tiiiiccckk ...")
+  (Thread/sleep 500)
+  (actions/do-dialogue entities :ego "Who is that?")
   (actions/talk entities :fairy-godfather "Taaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa-")
   (sound! (sound "dream/appear.ogg") :play (utils/current-sound-volume))
   (particle-effect! (get-in @entities [:room :entities :magic]) :reset)
@@ -165,15 +178,14 @@
   (Thread/sleep 100)
   (actions/talk entities :fairy-godfather "-daaaaaaaaaaaaa!")
   (Thread/sleep 2500)
-  (actions/do-dialogue entities :fairy-godfather "Welcome, young Tick, to the pit of fate!")
-  (actions/talk entities :ego "Pit of fate? I'm too young to die!" :anim :frustrated-talk)
+  (actions/talk entities :ego "Oh no! The grim reaper!" :anim :frustrated-talk)
   (actions/do-dialogue entities
                        :fairy-godfather "Relax, Tick. You're dreaming!"
-                       :ego "Who are you?"
-                       :ego "And how do you know my name?"
+                       :ego "I am?"
+                       :ego "Then who are you?"
                        :fairy-godfather "Why, I'm your fairy godfather of course!"
-                       :fairy-godfather "I've brought you here, Tick, to help choose your destiny."
-                       :fairy-godfather "Today you will choose your trade."
+                       :fairy-godfather "I've brought you here, to the pit of destiny."
+                       :fairy-godfather "Today you will choose your trade!"
                        :fairy-godfather "Let us see what your fate could bring!"
                        :fairy-godfather "Behold!")
   (particle-effect! (get-in @entities [:room :entities :magic]) :reset)